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My Eternal Happiness
Contributed by
karoody
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Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 07:15:03 PM in AEST
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I have never put into words exactly what you have done for me
Once upon a time, I stated that a young man saved me
I was wrong that day
It is you who truly freed my mind
It has always been you
My one true love
I will always remember the first time I saw you
The first time I heard your voice
The way you smile when you are with our children
The look in your eyes when we are together
The moment you asked for my hand forever
The laughter in our hearts as we spoke our vows
You, I will always treasure every second of every day
Happy or sad it's all okay
For you are always next to me at the end of the day
I will love you always and forever
You own my heart and soul
It is you who reminds me of the goodness in our lives
Even when I just want to cry
I am given your love and support every day
No matter what I do
We stand next to each other through every trial
Things that tears most people apart
I used to feel as if I messed up
For I never said much about my past
Now I realize why I never told you these things
These events are not who I am
They are merrily lessons along the way
Obstacles in my path
You always saw my true self
How far I will go
To hold fast to my convictions
And all the dedication I will give to my loved ones
No matter what they do
Because it is always the love that matters most
Copyright ©
karoody
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2014-06-08 19:15:03]
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by softerware on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:26:27 PM AEST
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Lucky lucky man you have there, and I'm sure he knows!
"For you are always next to me at the end of the day"..We measure love by those who stay..
Your cup runneth over. And lucky for us, so does your pen! A lovely testimonial.
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 10:19:03 PM AEST
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kara this is sooo beautifully written! it warms my
heart to know of the happiness you have found,
blessings to you and yours and may you ever
have ink:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 10:36:39 PM AEST
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Hi Karabeara! Glad to see you making an appearance.
This is a very lovely poem. I am so glad to see you are happy. So, I'm guessing you never have to use your squeaky voice. ;-)
Buh bye for now.
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 12:24:15 AM AEST
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Hello Kara
I think this is the 1st poem of yours that I've red. This is a very beautiful peace of work and it says just as much about you as it does your husband. Now I can see he is a special man and that makes you equally special I come to this conclusion how? Simple birds a feather flock together. Great job God bless
Greetings
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by Tiny_Tina on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 09:14:21 PM AEST
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| Sweet |
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by Ferrari14 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 03:20:39 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem |
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 08:48:47 PM AEST
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Wow!! What a beautiful declaration of your love for your husband, Kara! It is truly a pleasure to hear of your happiness and just to read your work again after so long. Take care of yourself...
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by Boomking on
Sunday, 15th June 2014 @ 03:17:55 PM AEST
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| How wonderfull to read these words deducated to a true love. Very inspiring piece of work! |
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Re: My Eternal Happiness
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by speedy on
Monday, 16th June 2014 @ 08:51:05 AM AEST
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This is the first of your poems I have read, & it's beautiful.
Great write.
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