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won't sleep without you
Contributed by
reprobate
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Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 06:47:37 AM in AEST
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Another day ceases past it's sunset sky
Prompting a call for my own quiet rest
Amidst life's donated piles is where I lie
Forgetting the now past's urgent request
A few squeaks, creaks and a rustle of sheet
Lying back, my arms surround my old friend
Not quite a lover, yet inspires such complete
So necessary if I am ever to sleep in the end
I poke and push and even strike my bedfellow
Who never utters a single complaint nor whine
Into a night now dark as the moor from othello
I nestle with arms wrapped, knowing he's mine
Ebon shadow silently paints this familiar place
An errant evening breeze giving drapes billow
With no one else would I share this warm embrace
Snuggled sleepily, thinking, oh how I love you, dear pillow
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reprobate
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2014-06-08 06:47:37]
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 10:02:00 AM AEST
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michael! lmao! oh clever funny you! after recently reading some of your racier poetry- heh, i had no idea here what to expect, thank you for sharing a glimpse into your world, a beautiful writer as always; this is brilliantly penned, even Into a night now dark as the moor from othello so poetical and gentle a line fits perfectly into your light hearted poem, you are a true artist:) !just for a split second i worried- ...then the ending! if only i had an ounce of your wit and ease of laughter!
love n' hugs nessa
wants to be your pillow *is jealous* |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 01:28:02 PM AEST
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Yes Nessa I also thought here comes a thing lol but the last line set it straight lol. Excellent write Soft.. Read it twice
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by softerware on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:21:50 PM AEST
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LOVE IT! A change up at the very last, you have caught me unaware again!
"Who never utters a single complaint or whine"…Oh such fun to go back and read again to see the web into which I happily fell!
To sleep, perchance to dream…dear pillow on your well worn seam!
Wonderful fun!
softerware |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by Ferrari14 on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 05:33:47 PM AEST
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| Nice poem |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by Ferrari14 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 03:44:20 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 11:35:24 PM AEST
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| lol ... sorry that's all I got. |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by brew on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 11:45:46 AM AEST
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Loved it, and was a write that catches you off guard.
brew~ |
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Re: won't sleep without you
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 24th January 2015 @ 08:22:30 PM AEST
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| Ha! Cute. Made me smile. These days my favorite bed companion is my dog. LOL Missed reading you, my friend. |
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