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Snow
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
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Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 05:07:58 AM in AEST
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A soft white canvas for angel wings to unfold,
Like a sweet sonnet great poets foretold,
Soft canvas for white springs to become whole,
With each flake unique as the human soul.
Gentle snow, how you messed my yard,
Summer regrets the moment winter sparred,
This small miracle covers my well nurtured greenery,
I dance with the spade to unravel this ceremony.
Gentle snow, barer of white jewels of the sky,
My yard is a festive of wonder for the eye,
My heart warms as my beautiful flower sleeps,
A white paradise of icy warmth and sorrow sweeps.
Gentle snow, my heart is marveled by this winter gold,
Spring waits for the release of your crimson hold,
This beautiful invisible design no eye ever sees,
A forgotten tune travelers hum upon a breeze.
Gentle snow, you reminisce of wasted dreams,
Your icy reign will soon fade as summer streams,
This canvas shall deteriorate and become old,
Like a precious painting, which was never sold.
Copyright ©
daylynn_van_wyk
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2014-06-07 05:07:58]
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Re: Snow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 07:40:33 AM AEST
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| WOW!!! This is absolutely amazing! I loved every word of it! I really enjoyed this :) |
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Re: Snow
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 10:05:29 PM AEST
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Hi there
Very nice poem and a beautiful picture painted of a cold winter snow. This shows there is beauty in everything in life. Great job
Greetings
Ruß |
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Re: Snow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 01:03:13 AM AEST
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holy cannoli, takes me back to the lake left
by the snow in early spring, oh how it changed everything once it dried, those long summer nights sitting with friends by an old tree that was not long ago partially covered in two feet of water. What's to become of this snowy white night, day.
excellent poem!
Thank you!
Peace! |
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Re: Snow
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:20:59 AM AEST
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| Lovely write my favourite verse is the second to last with its wonderful imagery,warmth of heart,uplifting poetic flow and I cannot help but contentedly sigh. |
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Re: Snow
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:22:06 PM AEST
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Good topic
excellent flow
thanx for sharing..... |
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Re: Snow
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by Ferrari14 on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 05:38:08 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem |
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