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A whimsical of Dreams
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 11:48:23 PM in AEST
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Close thy eyes and dream
dream of peace and wonderful things
don't hesitate, to go and see
one day many things will become ones dreams
Dreams that make you feel unsure
and dreams that take you to many pleasures
they can be dark and deep
but keep them in thy beating heart
Now close thy eyes and dream
BOO WAKE UP, its reality all again
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brew
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2014-06-06 23:48:23]
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 07:46:13 AM AEST
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| I really liked this! And after reading to the end, I realise how well the title fits the poem! It's great writing and it really drew me in :) |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 11:04:31 AM AEST
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soft, lovely, dreamish for sure, indeed so beautifully penned...
then the last line smacked me right in the forehead lol,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:24:40 PM AEST
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Like LadyFawn said
sweet gentle
then
BOOM...LOL. |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 02:46:14 PM AEST
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Lovely title.. The last line made me smile.
Enjoyed it.
Good seeing you again. Check your PM...
JenniK |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by Ferrari14 on
Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 05:38:45 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by JockPhillips on
Wednesday, 18th June 2014 @ 02:41:59 PM AEST
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| It is one for the dreamers who dream and light the night with their wicks and their whimsies. |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by AquaBlossom on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 01:11:05 PM AEST
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| Good write- Darcy |
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 12:16:39 AM AEST
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I used to like to dream and turn those dreams into reality.
Many years ago that left me. I think I/'/ll try to rediscover the art of dreaming. Great writing. |
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