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A whisper away
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 11:27:40 PM in AEST
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A month already
since you passed away.
Time marches on
marches on.
A smile or two
a tear or two
missing you
missing you.
Hold onto the faith
you know what they say
I will see you again
some day some day
so I chat with you
knowing
You are only a whisper away.
Time marches on
and at times its still hard
to believe you are really gone.
Seems like too many goodbyes
or so longs, death came calling again....
You know what they say,
so I keep chatting with you,
(all of you)
knowing
you are only a whisper away.
Miss you dad... Avalanche, Kelly, and Marie, sighhhhhhhh
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-06-05 23:27:40]
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Re: A whisper away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 12:25:22 AM AEST
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I love the way you repeated lines in this, Michelle! It gave it a really flowing rhythmy beat.
I talked to my sister the other night as I wrote a story. She passed almost eight years ago.
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Re: A whisper away
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by colinb on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 01:17:20 AM AEST
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| im sure you keep a piece of them in your heart |
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Re: A whisper away
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 01:42:31 AM AEST
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So sorry to hear about another loss for u.
I've had so many since I was on line last.
Cousin uncle etc.
Still they are just a whisper away.
Luv your write.
Huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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Re: A whisper away
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:06:51 AM AEST
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No one is ever truly departed when they lay in your memories.
A fitting and poignant tribute.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: A whisper away
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by Invierno on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:10:37 AM AEST
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gorgeous
Invierno |
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Re: A whisper away
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:32:28 AM AEST
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this is beautiful sweetie, love the title too... 'tis sad to
be the ones left behind, ...also true we are blessed to
have known them, for:: a candle that shines twice as
bright, burns half as long....
love you, hugs nessa
@->>->>---
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Re: A whisper away
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 02:59:12 PM AEST
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Hi Michelle
Hugs hugs and more hugs. May God give you strength. Very good write here yes Tim is quite right love reading this although it is sad.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: A whisper away
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by mick on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 03:53:48 PM AEST
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| Very good write here is quite right love reading this although it is sad. |
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Re: A whisper away
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:27:03 PM AEST
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Love everything about this flow
sorry for your loss. |
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Re: A whisper away
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 08:08:10 PM AEST
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| I'm so very sorry for all your loss. The words penned here are so eloquently written and I can not think of a better way of coping with the loss of loved ones or anything for that matter. I always love your writes, and this one was no exception. thank you for sharing this. |
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