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Ponderance of the Butterfly
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 03:56:22 PM in AEST
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Butterflies that are silky and soft
randomly flying in the air
Lands on the light
and catches the eye of a wandering soul
Ever wonder what butterflies actually do.?
The flight in air is with beauty
with every stroke of their tiny wings
every time I see a butterfly
it makes me ponder so many different thoughts
I still want to know what butterflies actually do.?!
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brew
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2014-06-03 15:56:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ponderance of the Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 10:51:53 PM AEST (User
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oh yes! for some reason those little fellows always
bring a smile as does your lovely poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Ponderance of the Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 01:40:18 AM AEST (User
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Very musical! Nice rhythm; like the dance they do in the air! What do butterflies do? they flutterby of course!
Welcome back Brew!
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Re: Ponderance of the Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 08:33:29 AM AEST (User
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flutterby and butterfly....I like that, softerware.
Brew...cool poem. My fav's are poems that address simple things (a reflection of my cognitive capacity perhaps) that are also beautiful things, especially so when given clothes in the form of a poem.
I hope you ramp up your writing again, brew....I enjoy reading the synthesis of your heart and mind.
Best,
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Re: Ponderance of the Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2014 @ 08:23:54 AM AEST (User
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This poem's awesome! :) |
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