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No one can compare
Contributed by
Bekkie
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 01:38:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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No one can compare..
So in depth, holding on with al of my might,
Waiting in the rain, a cold winter night.
Inhale, exhale, calm as I am,
Hair blowing in the wind.
Jean take my hand,
My eyes they close as I breath in deep,
You run threw my mind and my life is complete.
I open my eyes but your stil not there,
No one could take your place,
With you my hart I share, a cold afternoon,
Hands as cold as ice,
Thoughts go threw my mind,
My feelings are considerd,
Lying in your arms,
We are the perfekt match
This distance is discouraging
Yet im still attached,
Sitting by the fire
Thinking in a distant stare,
Waiting under the streetlight..
Nobody could ever compare!
Copyright ©
Bekkie
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2014-06-03 13:38:12]
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Re: No one can compare
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 02:00:18 PM AEST
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Hello Bekkie
First welcome to YPDC, and its awesome to see a family member here. I know putting your first poem out is scary believe me I know. However here are people like Emystar Ladyfawn Invierno Tim Muppetman and much much more these are good authors all that will guide you. Well done on your first step . As for your first poem nice one well done nooi.
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Re: No one can compare
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 11:14:47 PM AEST
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first of all, warm welcome to ypdc:) wow! this is a
beautiful first ever poem! i'm impressed! and look
forward to more from you! keep writing!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: No one can compare
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 08:16:14 AM AEST
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Nice of you to share your thoughts and feelings with us, welcome to the site.
I'm sure they bug has now bitten and you will be penning many more works to adorn these pages.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: No one can compare
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by speedy on
Monday, 16th June 2014 @ 09:02:36 AM AEST
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I never would've guessed that was your first!
It was great.
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