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I Don't Know

Contributed by Clown_Prince on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



My life seems like more than I can bear
Too often I find myself in times of despair
Not all the pieces seem like they fit
Did I mention my parents treat me like $***?
The girl that I love, loves someone herself
I'm happy for her, even if not for myself
I don't mind it so much, being just her friend
But since she's so busy, even that may end
Day after day, watching TV at home
Trapped in a box, a cage, a prison, a dome
I once had a job, it paid really good
But after 6 months I stood all I could
I was going crazy, so I went out the door
The thing is now, I'm left dirt poor
I had my reasons for leaving, of course
Even if now there's a bit of remorse
So, from here where is it that I must go?
Well, the truth of the matter is... I don't know.

05-18-2003




Copyright © Clown_Prince ... [ 2003-05-20 05:05:00]
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Re: I Don't Know (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:27:19 PM AEST
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ooo, i like it. i don't know exactly what it is that i like about it, it just all fits, and i like the anger involved. amazing. hope ur feeling a lil better now though.
Emily


Re: I Don't Know (User Rating: 1 )
by HumGirl18 on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 11:49:22 PM AEST
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this is a great write. I like the flow and the fact that it's easy to relate to.

Keep writing.


Re: I Don't Know (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 03:05:40 PM AEST
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Heh, is it just me or do people only get inspired when its just raining in their life? Hey, Ronnie, darling. Good poem. Glad that you're venting out. Haven't been able to talk to you much, yes, I know, and I'm sorry about that, but you know how work and school goes. Hope you're doing so much better now, sweetie!

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~


Re: I Don't Know (User Rating: 1 )
by loveiswonder on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:51:58 PM AEST
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i like it,i write things close to this. it is nice to see the same style of my writings. great poem.! nice flow!




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