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Lackluster
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 09:01:29 PM in AEST
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Drag me slowly... sleepy eyes,
Trap me in retrospect's snare,
Hazy days slip from tragic nights,
Stars dimmed by sunlight's glare,
Lost within the stoic recognition,
Of a sound that just isn't there.
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deusdeira
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2014-06-02 21:01:29]
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Re: Lackluster
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST
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this is beautiful! perfectly penned, the last two lines
really hit me! so flowing and poetic,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lackluster
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 07:09:42 AM AEST
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"Hazy days slip from tragic nights,
Stars dimmed by sunlight's glare,"
Very cool poem. The above line is tinged with booze and/or drugs (to me....to me...) and I like it in that context.
Great write and thanks for sharing it!
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: Lackluster
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 02:16:05 PM AEST
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Scary
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Lackluster
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 5th June 2014 @ 01:15:08 AM AEST
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| "Of a sound that just isn't there. It's often the recognition of what I is missing, something that can't be heard or felt that give the most complete picture of struggle and pain. Great insight. |
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