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Six feet tall
Contributed by
Natedog
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Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 03:17:23 PM in AEST
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The huge world and I'm so humble and small, even tho I stand six feet tall, i feel so sad and dark most of the time, I just want love in my life, to make it pristine and fine. I just want you, yes you, is that too much too ask? You mean so much more than fine piece of ass. You make me smile just by the look of your face, no one is more important in the human race. I can't even explain how you make me feel, to you it may not seem like a big deal. I want everything with you, no less than it all. For I am just a small boy who stands six feel tall.
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Re: Six feet tall
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by Invierno on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 04:39:41 PM AEST
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Dude, this is cool. Hope you read the comments. good lines in here. Nice beginning. Sweet realism. I don't know your world or waddup, but you have a real knack for poetry. Keep at it. Go get that chick!
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Re: Six feet tall
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 11:22:51 PM AEST
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warm welcome to ypdc:) a heartfelt write, i see talent, keep writing!
hugs n' love nessa |
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