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Different Needs
Contributed by
invierno
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Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 05:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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“Wait a minute Baby,
I don't think my heart is ready...
I don't think that I can make it on my own.
I need you beside me
To hold me and to guide me...
Protect me from a world that is so cold.”
“I want to keep you safe, Baby,
You know I really do....
And when we got together we both promised to.
But I already have a kid
Now I'm lookin' for a man...
I love you so much Baby, but I hope you understand.”
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invierno
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2014-06-01 17:31:16]
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Re: Different Needs
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st June 2014 @ 05:56:08 PM AEST
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ha! i knew it! behind every successful man is a woman telling
him what to do! actually this poem is f a b u l o u s! so for your
collective ideals i must say what i thought reading it, ::i thought
the woman was the first speaking, then the man- until i got to the
forth line second stanza, then i knew i had reversed it:: -so when
you annalize me i will have to fall under the catagory of a woman
who has once been- and would again love to be cared for, but in
this world me and many women are not living as such,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Different Needs
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by gypsymaddness on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 04:09:45 AM AEST
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| I thought it was the man speaking first. I got that right. But I thought it was the man continuing to speak. Haha. I was wrong. This poem was great. It lightened my day because it was a little light humor. Great poem. |
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Re: Different Needs
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 08:10:02 AM AEST
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I think men are more intrinsically atuned to accept neediness in a woman, than vice versa. There is a protective gene in men and one to feel protected in women. So I'm not sure whether it's steely backbone or simply our natures.
One thing's for sure: when she says, I ain't gonna be your replacement mother, she means it.
Certainly got me thinking. A testimony to the draw-you-in power of your poem. |
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Re: Different Needs
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by brew on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 02:04:58 PM AEST
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Agreed with all the comments above, and I would say that almost could be put into a song. Your writings are different, yet intriguing.
Brew~ |
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Re: Different Needs
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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Well well well my friend. Another brilliant write. Everyone has said all that needs to be said however I would like to add just 1 thing awesome to see a man speak the truth. Great job
Greetings
Rus |
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