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Seven Seconds to Assuage Two Hours
Contributed by
invierno
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Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 01:39:33 AM in AEST
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“I would rather die today
Than live another day in this death!”
Two hours fifteen minutes of mundane
acting, emotion;
hardly worth my breath
were it not for this one line uttered in celluloid
believability;
Kristen Stewart's finest seconds;
'tis true! Watch and see!
(at 1 hr. 42 minutes decisively)
“Snow White and the Huntsman”...
a drear oft repeated tale
told no less vibrant, no more enthralling
then ten prior fails.
(Snow White's saga never worthy of immortality, I offer?)
This line, for me,
worth it all, I proffer;
One AM notwithstanding....
I'm drawn to write this line
lest I stall
and it's loss makes my time spent,
(two hours fifteen minutes long)
carried ill on the morrow,
beating breast of full repent-
time squandered with no gain
but for this short repast of praised comment
and appreciations flame
of applause most fervent
for the diamond's shine
in a field of coal and
gray cement.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-05-31 01:39:33]
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Re: Seven Seconds to Assuage Two Hours
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 01:58:26 AM AEST
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ha! love this poem! {i saw the movie too your poem has
better images} i do love that one line in the movie though,
of applause most fervent
for the diamond's shine
in a field of coal and
gray cement.
love that!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Seven Seconds to Assuage Two Hours
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by softerware on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 10:48:43 AM AEST
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Oh I wish you were a movie critic! We'd have better fare in the offering! May I add a "short repast of praised comment"?..this was a fun read! The sarcasm is delightful and I can't imagine a more dismal venture than into "a field of coal and gray cement!" There is also a lesson hidden here: Seeking and finding operate at a 4:1 ratio, but, like your write here…are well worth the wait!
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Re: Seven Seconds to Assuage Two Hours
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by brew on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 02:16:40 PM AEST
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Tada......Nailed it. Good post, and straight to the point, in the poets way of words. Thanks.
brew~ |
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