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She
Contributed by
GILDORMUR
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Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 03:04:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The stars twinkled in her eyes
and angels whispered in her mouth
Among the petals lips ...
All beginnings went out of her
And it was but dark end after her...
Sun was with her everywhere,
The smile, the heart and laughter
And all meanings made sense
In a moment suspended ...
Of a lost time ...
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Re: She
(User Rating: 1 )
by marknaruka on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 12:34:10 AM AEST
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| there is no such thing called love. you just have to believe in today and tomorrow you'll be sad when she is gone. but the day after that you'll know that its better that she left |
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Re: She
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 08:15:54 AM AEST
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way to write it out...get it out....pour it out.....if a cup is full and more is required for the cup, then needs dictate a release of what is in the cup now to allow for more to be poured. Wow! Sounds confusing.
Anyway! I like your poem!
Best,
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Re: She
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by brew on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 08:46:27 AM AEST
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Release what you will today....move on or stay where your comfort zone still is. Just know, it will take one day at time, and things will begin to seem clearer. Good post.
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