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Comfort my Fall
Contributed by
mick
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Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 10:39:13 AM in AEST
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I'm tired of trying to pick myself
up after getting knocked down
down because I know everytime
it will hurt that much more.
I said that I would not let myself
fall for that trap again but I
always do.
I guess I am always going
to be the practical joke;
my words being the build up,
my love for you the punchline.
Copyright ©
mick
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2014-05-29 10:39:13]
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Re: Comfort my Fall
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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There can be no progress without discomfort. The day you stop trying to pick yourself up would be the real tragedy.
Cool poem....great last two lines.
Best,
Invierno |
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Re: Comfort my Fall
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by gypsymaddness on
Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 04:19:04 PM AEST
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This is short but it holds so much emotion. It made me so sad, because I can understand that feeling.
Yes, trusting someone after being betrayed is scary. But without trust, we wouldn't be able to do many things in this life we live.
I'm sorry you had to go through this.
Best wishes,
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Re: Comfort my Fall
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2014 @ 07:35:42 PM AEST
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heartfelt, believably honest and the second staza is
just heartbreaking! if the fire is hot why do we keep
touching it- burning our fingers- only the heart knows,
hugs n' love nessa |
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