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Lackluster
Contributed by
flex4life13
on
Tuesday, 27th May 2014 @ 05:45:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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In the thick of a watered down tempo, a dim-lit fortress not to my recognition
lively theatrics form a crescendo, surely it is only my depiction.
Forever and again, an aroma I am wafting which reminds me of you
ever slightly do i feign, a reminiscence that of which holds me like glue.
Wasted on nuances, flaky misgivings, tiresome overtures.
Will you ever Scrap the disdain from your sills.
Faulty incongruences, from poised to poison, the memories yet instill.
Lofty carvings, shavings of yesterday awarded to me.
satisfying not my cravings, beguiling creature of ecstasy.
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flex4life13
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2014-05-27 17:45:18]
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Re: Lackluster
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 12:27:07 PM AEST
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this is, as always, beautifully penned, the
gracefully flowing words hint of romance, the
imagery is subtle and gentle, a brilliant write:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lackluster
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 05:57:26 AM AEST
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| hot damn, this is a great write. I will be revisting this again very soon. lofty carvings, shavings of yesterday awarded to me....such a great line. |
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Re: Lackluster
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 29th July 2015 @ 03:26:06 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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