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Shhhhhhhh
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 09:34:49 PM in AEST
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Shhhhhh, please give one a moment's peace
Quiet, what will it take to give a soul release
Racing, the words wander around the track
Never forward as they are always looking back
Hearts seeking solace in a second's respite
Fix the past will not make the future right
What transpired in the days long gone by
Can't be vanquished in the blink of an eye
Yesterday's in the thoughts that silently creep
Tomorrow's in the eyes that forgot to weep
Today's in the moments of deep disguise
What's left can only be seen by God's eyes
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2014-05-24 21:34:49]
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Re: Shhhhhhhh
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 08:08:44 AM AEST
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deeply moving and heartfelt, it sounds like you
are handling whatever/whoever, and are far too
long overdue for a l o n g h o t s o a k in the tub
with candles:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Shhhhhhhh
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 09:03:05 AM AEST
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Good job on capturing an essence of the madness of life.
Nessa is right on the tub. Some really solid points exposed...well done! |
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Re: Shhhhhhhh
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 11:59:36 AM AEST
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Indeed
the need for a time out
to just chill and think things over
is so
very
hard to get. |
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Re: Shhhhhhhh
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 09:29:05 PM AEST
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In the hectic mayhem that we call life, a moment to ourselves tends to be a very rare commodity. I certainly hope you find your moment (psst...lock the bathroom door so they can't bother you!!)
Very lovely write.
Thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Shhhhhhhh
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 10:22:27 PM AEST
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so brilliantly said...
wow...
here I am in the now
thinking about it and all
you say
what made the home
where did it lead
this is a masterpiece!
thank you!
Peace! |
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