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flog a willing horse
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 05:00:34 AM in AEST
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Baby, there you go again
no shame, there's no remorse
no ryhme can take away the pain
so flog the willing horse
he'll stay there right before you
despite your brute and force
despisingly, you force a stain
upon the willing horse
you thrash away so wildly
we're here, the same old course
disgusted by your lost refrain
you flog the willing horse
sound sleeps, it could not maintain
post broken, split, divorce
it fell away as grain by grain
your will released the horse
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Re: flog a willing horse
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 09:07:18 AM AEST
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A masterful employment of analogy.
I'm not sure who I pity more here...the horse or the brute flogging it.
Both are in pain. Very well done.
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Re: flog a willing horse
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 09:33:52 PM AEST
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I kind of wish the horse kicked.
Nice work.
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