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Journey
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Monday, 19th May 2014 @ 02:29:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Let's take off on a journey, just you and me
Riding the roads to see what we can see
We'll drive with the radio blaring our favorite song
Wind whistling around as we loudly sing along
We'll find a lake or maybe the big blue sea
Racing the waves, our laughter ringing free
Maybe we'll luck upon a large grassy field
Where you'll fight fire dragons with your shield
We'll lie on our backs and describe each cloud
Having more fun and joy than time does allow
We'll walk along a tree lined, dusty track
Listening to birds sing, never looking back
I'll watch your eyes and drown in your smile
Wishing this day to never end with you, my child
As darkness falls, we'll sit on the hood of the car
I'll marvel in you as you marvel we went so far
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dvtpdw
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2014-05-19 14:29:34]
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Re: Journey
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by ScribereHabeo on
Monday, 19th May 2014 @ 09:14:59 PM AEST
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What a relaxing and beautifully written poem.
This is a great poem that made me smile pretty wide.
Thanks for the read -Z.D |
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Re: Journey
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by RussellReinhardt on
Monday, 19th May 2014 @ 10:54:08 PM AEST
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I haven't read something from you for a while now. I'm so glad I looked at this one it brought that warm fuzzy feeling and a smile to my face heart and soul as it took me back to the days I spent time with my mom or dad. It maid me remember the times my mom thought me how to do things around the house and the long trips I used to take with my dad on the truck. Thank you for sparking these memories on a day when I needed it. Very beautiful poem.
Greetings
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Re: Journey
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 12:04:47 AM AEST
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Love it! Your writing seems so effortless.
Did you read it to him?
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Re: Journey
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 09:42:20 AM AEST
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so sweet and beautiful! a joy to read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Journey
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 02:45:52 PM AEST
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A nice, light poem. I love how this delights with imagery! It makes me wish I could pull up a piece of grass right beside you:) Thanks for posting.
~Scorp |
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Re: Journey
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by Invierno on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 08:14:22 AM AEST
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This dances along and allows visualization. I say this is pretty good.
Reminds me of Travels with Charlie.
I'm diggin' it.
Thanks for the journey- I went with you.
Best,
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Re: Journey
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by desire on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 08:29:03 AM AEST
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A day of fun with someone i love.
it was a besutiful vusual day
totally awesome
loved it
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