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Full Circle Frenzy
Contributed by
invierno
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 07:28:41 PM in AEST
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With a pen for a friend
and a fool for a hand,
with a brain made of rain
and a soul made of sand,
with toes that won't go
and feet that won't run,
in a race undefined
where the winner is none;
in a clamouring stammer
staccato beat hammer
a grasping unclasping
of bowling unrolling,
an unfurling curling,
I find once again,
after all of this running
I'm back with my pen.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-05-14 19:28:41]
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Re: Full Circle Frenzy
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 07:58:30 PM AEST
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ha! that was full circle! i love this, great
style and flow, a beautiful poem!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Full Circle Frenzy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 11:32:28 PM AEST
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That was great! Such an easy joyful read because of the flow and the way you structured the words. Yayness be yours and ours. |
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Re: Full Circle Frenzy
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by softerware on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 10:19:50 PM AEST
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Wish you could hear me clapping! This is delightful! Has a simple and natural rhythm that flows like a conversation with an old friend.
Like when you write with your slippers on!
softerware |
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