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The meadow dream
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 05:45:51 PM in AEST
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A pretty place,peaceful serene
I wondered if this was like Heaven?
Not sure but it seemed
to be a place for Golden dreams.
Meadow grass tall and green
dancing in a summer wind.
Water ponds with gurgling stream
heart a flutter merriment.
Wildflowers and roses bloomed
blue sky dusted with lemon sun.
On the breeze jasmine perfume
touched with hints of rose petals.
Wind whispered my name
soft and sweet,blowing my hair
and dancing round my legs
blowing my skirt, fluttering.
Doves sang to me, sheltered me
never leaving my side.
The lady bug and also
butterflies butterflies.
No people there just me
no memory or sadness
just calm, just peace
best of all simply love
warm love gathering me.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-05-14 17:45:51]
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Re: The meadow dream
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 06:04:20 PM AEST
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sooo beautiful! exquisite! a poem as poetry should be,
light, wistful and ohhhh so pretty!!!! i couldn't pick out a
favorite line if my life depended on it, absolutely stunning!
woofies, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The meadow dream
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 08:45:32 PM AEST
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| How peaceful, wonderful, embracing, soothing.....thank you for helping me feel those emotions......you have given me a gift. |
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Re: The meadow dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th May 2014 @ 11:14:42 PM AEST
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Holy *****, Michelle! Talk about visual imagery. You did well here....very well!! No, excellent!
So very impressive indeed. |
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Re: The meadow dream
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by Tiny_Tina on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 12:29:49 AM AEST
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| what a pretty poem! |
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Re: The meadow dream
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by speedy on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 09:34:57 PM AEST
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Sounds like you're describing your "happy place".
It's very pretty.
Great write.
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Re: The meadow dream
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by softerware on
Thursday, 15th May 2014 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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Splendid and transparent..so we can super impose ourselves into your experience..this unfolds like the house lights slowly coming up on a blackened stage--and behold! Your magical meadow!
Curtain call!
Had I brought flowers, you would have to duck!
softerware |
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Re: The meadow dream
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 05:11:36 PM AEST
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Generated such a warm and peaceful feeling, you chose your words to great effect.
Even though the weather here hasn't been great lately, summer has come here on this page.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: The meadow dream
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by colinb on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 05:16:07 PM AEST
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| beautifull i want to be their |
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