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Echoes of the Past
Contributed by
northernlights
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Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 02:17:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Words of their very nature unspeakable lay buried beneath years of
Being till with childlike trust in humanity they rise as springs and flow
From lips of quivering reluctance appearing as echoes of the past. The
Ebb and flow of bygone years a faceless form looking for identity in the
Furrows of pain, etched in those honourable moments of uttered truth before
Leaving.Shadows in time awoken from recesses darken corridors of recognition
Then Vanish.Wisdom turns the card of uncertainty and dwells till realisation throws it
Into the fire and all but the residue of choice is left.
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northernlights
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2014-05-10 02:17:05]
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Re: Echoes of the Past
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 12:13:20 PM AEST
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wow! this poem smacks me right in the heart!
its so amazingly beautiful! i'm blown away by
how i feel right now...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Echoes of the Past
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by softerware on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 09:52:17 PM AEST
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"A faceless form looking for identity"..and then
"wisdom turns the card of uncertainty"..My two favorite line in this piece..
It is hard to rule out "with childlike trust in humanity they rise as springs"
In fact, it's hard to find any line lesser than another. Your work is rich with abstract imagery and as translucent as it's possible interpretations. Always a delight when you leave the context to the reader! We can all behold what we want to see! As close to ONE SIZE FITS ALL as can be!
Well crafted enjoyment!
softerware
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Re: Echoes of the Past
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th May 2014 @ 01:54:23 AM AEST
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I felt this within the deepest parts of my heart.Emotions flowing. I hope you are ok??
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Michelle |
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