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The Perfect Slow
Contributed by
potentialpoet96
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Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 11:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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After waiting for months for this to change,
I never want to go back.
We were the average cliche,
best friends falling in love.
It was the perfect kind of slow,
waiting for you.
It was the perfect kind of slow,
when you first kissed me.
It was the perfect kind of slow,
when you asked me to be yours.
With you, everything is the perfect kind of slow.
The kind of slow you never want to end,
the perfect kind of slow you want to last forever.
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potentialpoet96
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2014-05-09 23:43:45]
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Re: The Perfect Slow
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by UnknownLegend on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 01:24:52 AM AEST
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Patience (Going slow) in most cases is a wonderful virtue to possess. Seems you have defined that virtue very well, realistically knowing perfection is in the eye of the one in the middle of it all. Who cares what anyone else sees or thinks.?
"Oh to look at things with the scrutiny of love and a partially blind eye and see all things as perfect ....! " . |
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Re: The Perfect Slow
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by TheDreamer on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 01:48:49 AM AEST
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You've crafted this in such a wonderful elegant way! Flows beautifully. Bravo!
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Re: The Perfect Slow
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 11:04:35 AM AEST
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this is so beautifully sweet!
hugs n' love nessa |
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