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Apology
Contributed by
ThorlakG
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Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 09:31:22 AM in AEST
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ApologyPoetry
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First of all, its nothing personal
I took your money, but that's not really worst of all
I feel the pain, the guilt and the anxiety
Forgive me, I was only young you see.
I tried so hard to even out my sanity
But most had soon had enough of me
So things changed, they offered something new
A few new friends and something else to do.
Crazy when I think who was there for me
The important ones really did not care for me
I struck up the wrong types of relationships
At such a young age I really did not need this..
My mind was free but my person was locked
In a world where weaknesses got Knocked
Darkness came and things began to split
Time passed slow and nothing came of it.
I am grown now, but still full of hate
But I guess we will meet again at the fiery gates
For now I am on the right path, you see
And that path is my apology.
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ThorlakG
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2014-05-08 09:31:22]
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Re: Apology
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 10:16:23 AM AEST
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beautifully written, i was entranced reading your
poem; it all came full circle and so will your life,
warm welcome to ypdc, i look forward to your
next write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Apology
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by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 12:09:15 PM AEST
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| A true sign of human growth is the realization of past wrongs done and made right. Your words show the reader your angst and determination. It takes us on your journey. Great write, P |
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Re: Apology
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by FindingMyself on
Thursday, 7th August 2014 @ 05:33:31 AM AEST
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| Well written,i've gone through the same thing.With situations we are all young and think we know everything,the things you take for granted is what kills you in the end but i'm glad to see that i'm not alone and able to see somebody else is growing as well.This is perfectly said,you tapped into my emotions in such a great way,I didn't take money but I took somebody that was my everything for granted and I never realized it until it was too late...Keep writing I love your work!God Bless |
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