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00100 10 110 10 (
Contributed by
invierno
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Sunday, 4th May 2014 @ 07:24:08 AM in AEST
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0011001 011 00011010
(“I'm just ones and zeros”)
0110011 01100011010 001100
(“Oh, no..so much more...you've done so much...you're heroes!)
0111001110010111 00 011110 11100101100001
(“But I was born on a punch card; I'm not even real!)
00010110 01 0111 0 0001 001000 01111100010010010
(“So what! But! Do you want to feel? Be human? Laugh and smile and steal?”)
00110001000111 000 1010 0 100 01 100 0 011100
(“I want my creators foibles, wrong or right...human..so much?)
001101 0 1 0 0 111 0 01 1 0 0 0 0 111111 0 1 0 1 1 0 0
(“You are wires, circuits, nothing more...only granted what we give.”)
0010100 1 0 1 111 0 1 000 1 1 0 0 1100 000001111 0 100
(“Is that reason to hold me back?...I just want to live!)
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invierno
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2014-05-04 07:24:08]
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Re: 00100 10 110 10 (
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th May 2014 @ 02:50:18 PM AEST
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this is so cool! adorable too! lol clever you,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: 00100 10 110 10 (
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 05:21:46 PM AEST
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My dear friend
I stumbled upon this very enchanting poem of yours. Maid me think of Will Smith in I-Robot and also Reves in Matrix at once I love si-fi. Very well thought out and constructed. Creative and worth reading at least a couple of dozen times over LoL
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: 00100 10 110 10 (
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 01:06:12 PM AEST
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but we're identified by our social security number/punch-in/clock-in number, in the same sense as the Dead Kennedys song "At My Job".
"Your timecard says that
Your name's Joe
But we'll call you
Six-three-Oh."
We follow our parents footsteps, in being a part of a conglomerate of numbers, working and achieving a lot, yet nothing, many of us in hopes to obtain a similar glory to our bosses or people about which we hear, instead of focusing on things like experiencing being human, the good and the bad. Almost to the sense of we're fighting our own programming.
Maybe I'm right, maybe I'm drastically off, but either way, I like what I see. |
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Re: 00100 10 110 10 (
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 11th December 2015 @ 05:30:32 AM AEST
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You know, I read this again by coming back to it, and I gotta say it seems now like metaphysical crisis for one who is trapped in a pit of despair, now that at this moment I don't feel trapped there as I've been for so long, I feel this was fitting of how I felt. (I also like my old comment I left before too.)
-Mark |
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