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Why do you keep silent ?
Contributed by
venkat
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Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Are you indifferent to the call of my soul?
Are you deaf to the cries of my heart?
Why don't you answer me?
Why do you stare with cruelty of heavens?
Did you turn into an image of black alabaster?
Did you turn into a mountain of darkness?
If you don’t like my presence and
If you don’t want my love and laughter
You should hate me and kill me then.
Why do you turn your head aside?
O.k. Stop listening my words!
Stop to look at my face!
Hand me your shining sword!
Hand me your dexterous dagger!
Aah, I bore a hole into my bosom
Plucked out my heart and threw it into the sky
Aah, I cut my head and flung into your heaven
Behold my head that blazes like sun rising in the sky
And my blood flushed as the dawn
Behold, my heart turns into shining moon
And blood sprinkled in the sky turn into trillions of stars
Why do you scream among thundering clouds,
And down pour tears of blood into oceans?
Why do you stretch hands into infinite void?
And why do you dance in the darkness of night
As goddess of death with flowing disheveled hair?
19-5-2003
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:17:31 PM AEST
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| oh my god venkat! i don't know how to say how much i love this poem and it has moved me, i felt every word and line in my chest, this was what i needed to read today, thanks, bunches, hugs nessa |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:23:05 PM AEST
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very wonderful emotional write
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 11:43:55 PM AEST
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Absolutely awesome write, Venkat!!
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:05:40 AM AEST
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| Words can't express the way this poem touched my heart ... chilling beauty is the best way I can describe this poem - I loved it from the first words... Jan |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 12:15:25 AM AEST
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Venkat how do you do it? Wow!! This is a very powerful poem. As always well done. You always amaze me with your words.
Michelle |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 07:39:41 AM AEST
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| Dear friend Nessa, I am very much pleased to know that you have read each line and each word and enjoyed it.. thank you.. venkat |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 07:43:27 AM AEST
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| chilling beauty..yes that is the correct word .. I am very happy to know your truly enjoyed the poem.. thank you.. venkat |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 02:04:01 AM AEST
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Powerful and beautifully written.
Thanks for sharing such mastery. |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by loveiswonder on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 12:00:31 AM AEST
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| the words are amazing! You are gifted...keep us blessed with more writings!! |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 03:20:03 AM AEST
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Vern' I couldn't make it to the end. Perhaps my imagination is too vivid, more likely your imagery is too strong (or both).
Perhaps I saw too much reality during WWII
(1940/41 blitzes) . Imaginary blood soaked corpses don't smell. |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 04:30:09 AM AEST
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| Sorry the last phrase of my comment is misleading.........."smell" (the act of discerning an odour) is not the word I should have used. "Stink" (to give off an odour) is what I meant to say. |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by venkat on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 01:53:17 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed all your comments..thank you very much.. for your inspiring comments.venkat |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 02:59:21 AM AEST
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you imagery has me dazzled... it seems the words flow effortlessly from you proverbial pen... yet i feel the depth of commitment to everything you write... another stunner, dear friend... blessings...
(ps, i love these darker poems... ) |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by kalika_vidya on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:21:19 AM AEST
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| wow, wow..I can't believe this.. how could you write this.. |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by kalika_vidya on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 08:21:47 AM AEST
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| wow, wow..I can't believe this.. how could you write this.. |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 01:03:43 AM AEST
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how nice to be reading your words again...hugs
kara |
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Re: Why do you keep silent ?
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:25:47 AM AEST
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| Haa...my dear friend you too read this.. well caught I am.. venkat |
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