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Heaven or Hell
Contributed by
MikeSage
on
Friday, 2nd May 2014 @ 04:20:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Unlock your potential, with your GOD given key
Negative beliefs keep you always, drifting at sea
So alter your thoughts, make them happy and free
If life changes are the things, that you wish to see
We are all the creators, of our own destiny
GOD’S kingdom is within – both in you & in me
This means that satan doesn’t exist, there is no enemy
And our failures are our own, and not some conspiracy
Lets strive to be the best, each, according to their ability
Because Heaven and hell co-exist, in the same great city
Where to live is your choice, but I’m sure you’ll agree
That Heaven must be, a hell, of a nice place to be!
Copyright ©
MikeSage
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2014-05-02 16:20:56]
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Re: Heaven or Hell
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 3rd May 2014 @ 04:49:44 PM AEST
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Hello Mike
I'm not going to ge into a lengthy discussion about this or that. Who knows where Heaven or hell may be. However you way off with your statement that satan does not exist, beware this thinking will tel him in and you will have a HELL of a time evicting him. Please go study the word again before putting a statement like that out there again. We must be careful what we as Christian say. For what we say must be inline with God's word. Other than that the poem is well written flows well and reads easy good rhyming as well.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: Heaven or Hell
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th May 2014 @ 11:56:47 PM AEST
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beautifully written, welcome to ypdc,
i look forward to more from you,
hugs n' love nessa |
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