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A PLACE TO WHERE

Contributed by hray42 on Wednesday, 30th April 2014 @ 09:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

we have achieved an excellent speed, haven't we?
we have certainly come to the forefront
we are vastly outgrowing much of our galaxy
shedding off the old apelike grunt

my now, your future, is unreachable in your time
that is in my conscience sense to be precise
i do not exist to your daily paradigm
and to us, you were just the needed mice

i do not mean to insult your intelligence
i do not insult or make compare
your donation of flesh proved to be of relevance
but still, as to why i exist, i do not care

i am on a journey, so too are you then
this is, or was, a time travel expedition
not to a place of before, or even of when
not as you think it to be in your tradition

i can alter my past and future from where
i can attain unreported acceleration to a certain point
we now have magic that you would never dare
and medicine that you would not anoint

so, i will find myself elsewhere very soon
i will do this perfectly, as they have suggested
be them all men of science to make question of the moon
and be them all heretics if ever contested

i am here now, a place to where
the fabric of the universe did not show tear
i am not just a dream, or simply the air
i have traveled back to see you from way over there......

Copyright © hray42 ... [ 2014-04-30 21:22:13]
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Re: A PLACE TO WHERE (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 30th April 2014 @ 10:19:48 PM AEST
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ahhh... i love your last stanza so muchly; if only
such were so.. this is just soo beautiful, from
flawless write to effortless dreamy style, amazing
images too,

hugs n' love nessa

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