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untitled
Contributed by
speedy
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Friday, 25th April 2014 @ 09:19:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The wind of change;
The pain of loss:
The shaky bridge
We all must cross.
The fear of pain-
So deep; so true:
Seen by me
& felt by you.
Time is change
My dear old friend;
The fear & pain
In time will end.
Copyright ©
speedy
... [
2014-04-25 21:19:55]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 01:31:01 AM AEST
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That's a really nice pep talk too! Me likes.
I think the last line would make a great title.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: untitled
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 06:32:23 AM AEST
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| Well done. |
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Re: untitled
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 12:13:30 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this! Powerfully expressed in so few words. Well done. I personally think a take on the first line would make a great title- "Winds of Change" perhaps. Either way, great job.
~Scorp |
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Re: untitled
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th April 2014 @ 12:46:14 PM AEST
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a perfect poem, i love the images you send
to my heart, filled with such great empathy,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: untitled
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th December 2022 @ 12:24:23 AM AEST
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| You are a very talented writer. You should publish your poems. This one has a nice calming affect. I like your style. |
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Re: untitled
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th December 2022 @ 12:24:26 AM AEST
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| You are a very talented writer. You should publish your poems. This one has a nice calming affect. I like your style. |
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