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Victor
Contributed by
syndrom
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Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 04:35:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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my fists clench; boom
filled with marrow from my chest
in the end I'm much more than myself
inadequate
all four legs vanished diminished in crumbs
I baked ideas; the remnants
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2014-04-22 16:35:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Victor
(User Rating: 1 ) by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2014 @ 02:44:37 PM AEST (User
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So much torment, anguish contained in a space not designed to hold it. Pain showing plainly, yet hidden beneath. Very strong write, P |
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