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Pretty Face
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Friday, 18th April 2014 @ 11:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Too much
I can't get enough
Send me some love
Send it in the mail
A package with your name
Filled with photographs of your face
Take me wildly
Into a life I know not of
One of happiness and treasure
I leave you lonely
Enjoy my past
Love your new man
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Jyssvw22
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2014-04-18 23:53:53]
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Re: Pretty Face
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 19th April 2014 @ 06:32:35 PM AEST
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I like the ambiguity of the last stanza. Who is truly the lonely one? The lover who moved on, or the one who writes of her?
Nice one.
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Re: Pretty Face
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 03:45:12 PM AEST
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powerful poem in a neat little package,
hugs n' love nessa |
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