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Through the Wind and in the Sky
Contributed by
Dagger-of-the-Mind
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Wednesday, 16th April 2014 @ 10:51:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Leaves hanging from tree branches all green
Warm breeze blows through them and around swirling about.
The warm weather stays as long as we can keep the world from spinning round.
It seems that the cold weather with is frozen ice will never rain down on the green blanket.
The slow passing of time in its slowness is not so slow when it is done.
Leaves turn colors days become shorter and the leaves feel the cold in the air.
Some of the them begin falling to the grownd and are carried away in the breeze.
Others go with ease as if they wanted to.
And the winds blow the sky moves the trees
And the colorful things fly to the grownd.
And the cold winds blow the snow falls
The trees are bare.
All but one leave
Blows in the cold wind
All alone
All bown the color is gone
It clings on all through the cold winds
When the sun come back up it is pushed down by new leaves begining to sprout
It falls to the ground, None even notice.
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Re: Through the Wind and in the Sky
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by dvtpdw on
Thursday, 17th April 2014 @ 04:21:32 PM AEST
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| I like how this portrait of the passage of time takes the reader on the circle of time. Your words create a world of colorful imagery. It gives a sense of awe, sadness and a hint of tomorrow. Very nice write, P |
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Re: Through the Wind and in the Sky
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th April 2014 @ 06:47:32 PM AEST
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lovely images; like watching a film about the life of the tree, very enjoyable read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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