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A Constant Drifter
Contributed by
Suryaansh
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Wednesday, 9th April 2014 @ 02:11:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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To be or not to be, that is the question
No soul today can be judged by mere first impression,
Venomous seeds of egotism have started to bear fruit
‘Humane’ and ‘human’ no longer share the same word root!
Life in here has become one colosseum show
Where the heck are we going, my mind bleeds to know!
Art of heart making has been left seriously flawed,
One seems to suspect whether there still resides a God!
Not a person, has escaped unscathed from this disease
The narcissist inside is far from release,
Even a bond as serene as comradeship, cannot bear the brunt
Brutus was a friend who stabbed from the front!
Hopes as falsifying, as this deceitful era
One is always on the lookout for the next charming chimera
World has transformed into a bulging shape-shifter,
What better defence than to be a constant drifter!!
Suryaansh, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.
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Suryaansh
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Re: A Constant Drifter
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by Dimitriand on
Wednesday, 9th April 2014 @ 10:52:33 AM AEST
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Like Odyssey by needle's eye mayby...
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Re: A Constant Drifter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 03:56:42 PM AEST
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"Brutus was a friend who stabbed from the front!" I really like that line. :)
So, I have a question for you. Why is it that you apparently only know how to write poems, but not read them?
I shall quote a good YPDC buddy:
"You may think you are the world's gift to poetry but most likely you are not because if all you care about is your own writes then you're missing the big picture."
How about instead of just coming here to post your poems put some of that time aside and read/comment on some of our other talented poets here at ol' YPDC. It's not Suryaansh.com!
Could you imagine if we were all like this, just posting poems like you do and not reading them, how messed up that is? It doesn't make sense to simply write but not read and share your thoughts.
It's selfish.
Thanks,
Tim |
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