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To undo time
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Monday, 7th April 2014 @ 11:59:26 PM in AEST
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To undo time, she said,
To heal my scars with sleep
There is nothing left
A box of broken dreams
Opens across the stony
Emaciated faces of old lovers
To undo time, she said,
To breathe new dust
There is nothing left
Let love break itself.
A white pavilion
Reddened with snow
Every star is lost, she said,
Time fades with every breath
There is nothing left
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2014-04-07 23:59:26]
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Re: To undo time
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 8th April 2014 @ 01:03:39 PM AEST
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I like this. . . "We watch dreams die and turn to dust long after the time has passed away. . ."
Sometimes we must start with nothing to realize we have everything. You have a very thought provoking poem here. |
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Re: To undo time
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th April 2014 @ 11:55:00 PM AEST
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beautifully exquisite,
hugs n' love nessa |
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