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untitled
Contributed by
etherealgurl
on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Time is irrelevent
space is an illusion
Your mind is ugly
and your identity a confusion
Of memories and heartaches
Bad times and intrusions
you have no idea
where or when
how or why
so you run away
break down and cry
you've lost yourself
in a lie
Copyright ©
etherealgurl
... [
2003-05-19 14:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 04:49:25 PM AEST (User
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hey...i just wanted to say that this poem is amazing and i really love it...and thankyou very very much for your comment on my poem...i was so touched... |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:11:50 AM AEST (User
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Life seems to have become so complicated.
An excellent portrayal of confusion
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