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The Life Destroyed
Contributed by
EveAlone
on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 09:26:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It stabs my heart
I take a breath
Drag me down
Such unrest
Paint my face
No one sees
The life destroyed
Fallen trees
Surrounded by love
Lost in the light
Nothing above
Tears all night
Ride in on a horse
Out on a high
Lay me down
I will not die
The shards of glass
Mark my face
Sunken in
Without a trace
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EveAlone
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2014-04-05 21:26:30]
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Re: The Life Destroyed
(User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on
Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 01:59:42 AM AEST
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No one may see, but the author knows! How well you describe anguish and escape!
"Lay me down, I will not die"..and in the morning sun, it begins again, does it not?
Let your beautiful words be the voice of your soul! I wish I could describe my feelings as well as you!
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Re: The Life Destroyed
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 12:23:22 AM AEST
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exquisite, moving, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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