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Some Small Loss
Contributed by
spike
on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 07:03:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I left the sunrise to the birds
kept under covers by small words
ignored the palette of the dawn,
the golden visage of the morn
slept through the warm midday sun
and all the work planned to be done,
turned my back to waning noon
til Sol acquiesced to moon
and Luna stole the last of light,
to hang in evening, fat and bright.
until hunger cried its demands
and aching muscles made commands
to cast my eyes at the door,
and place foot, finally, to floor.
but once again, she said
Come, make love to me instead
so, reluctantly, I stayed in bed.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2014-04-05 19:03:41]
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Re: Some Small Loss
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by Invierno on
Monday, 7th April 2014 @ 07:14:55 AM AEST
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| reluctantly? riiiiggghhhht......lol |
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Re: Some Small Loss
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 8th April 2014 @ 01:06:53 PM AEST
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| This is really good. I really like the rhyme and meter of this poem. KUDOS |
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Re: Some Small Loss
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by spud on
Friday, 11th April 2014 @ 09:39:07 AM AEST
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Hi S,
''So, reluctantly, I stayed in bed.''
Yeah, a man's gotta do what a man's gotta do!
A nice little number. Enjoyed.
Spud
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Re: Some Small Loss
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 07:59:56 PM AEST
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beautiful and romantic, love the picture too,
hugs n' love nessa |
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