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You Were Wrong
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 11:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why you did what you did
I don't know
but
it was wrong,
it's not like you
to lose your kool
but you did.
The talking heads will chatter
it doesn't matter what they say
there will always be crippled pilgrims
who live off your pain,
we all fall and hit the ground
then we get up
and move on.
You're Off balance for the moment
as Lifes carousel spins you 'round and 'round
you are shaken and feeling down
but don't let you stop you,
just be yourself
keep doing your thing
you're still a film star creature
and one of the team,
In the movie called life
theres always something happening
and this was just one scene..
now
it's time to move on...
but
you were wrong.
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2014-04-04 23:28:32]
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Re: You Were Wrong
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 07:59:15 AM AEST
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PERFECT
"keep doing your thing
you're still a film star creature
and one of the team,
In the movie called life
theres always something happening
and this was just one scene.. |
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Re: You Were Wrong
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 08:20:51 AM AEST
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I like this. We are all in this crazy/beautiful game of life together. Everyone makes mistakes, and when you are wrong just suck it up, admit it and move on. Most importantly, learn from our mistakes.
~Scorp |
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Re: You Were Wrong
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by Apollonia on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 12:09:44 PM AEST
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Yeah agree... very good poem.
Filled with so many feelings I think |
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Re: You Were Wrong
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 03:15:08 PM AEST
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yes, we all fall down; you were a true honest friend here
and were honest and helpful with someone; a strong heartfelt poem,
also thank you for reading me, hugs n' love nessa |
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