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Tryin'
Contributed by
invierno
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Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 04:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I tried before n' I'm trying' right now
I'm tryin tryin tryin but I don't know how
I've tried to love properly n' I've tried to be a dad
A life of tryin' so hard, how it's endin' so sad.
I don't know where I'm goin' or where I comin' from
It's funny but I'm learnin' my lessons from my son,
He's teachin' me anew what it means to be alive
decades of blindness, all I wanna do is cry.
My eyes are comin' open, not as wide as I want
the crust of this culture, I've got to shake it off
Consumerism mindset, I'm finally breakin' free
Changin' my perception after half a century.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2014-04-04 16:02:26]
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Re: Tryin'
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 11:30:37 PM AEST
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I like this
well done.... |
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Re: Tryin'
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 05:15:46 AM AEST
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Yes we are never to old to learn. Good write
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Rus |
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Re: Tryin'
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 5th April 2014 @ 01:33:57 PM AEST
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Better late than never... And yes, children are fantastic windows into all that truly matters in life.
Beautiful.
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