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Voices
Contributed by
Colinard_01
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Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 11:21:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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We all have something to say
Despite the silence in our hearts
We live to talk, we live to express
Smothered by ourselves and the world around us
Fighting for that control, depressed at our lose of it
Wanting, needing, feeling, but never healing
Things to say that can't be understood
So we embrace the silence and hope for the day it's lifted.
Copyright ©
Colinard_01
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2014-04-04 11:21:00]
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Re: Voices
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by Spike on
Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 10:44:26 PM AEST
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Amen to that. Brings to mind a quote from Oliver Wendell Holmes:
Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them.
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Re: Voices
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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Very nicely done and well stated. Don't hold back.
Was this line:
Fighting for that control, depressed at our lose of it
Supposed to say
Fighting for that control, depressed at our loss of it
?
Lose just sounded a bit odd to me.
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Re: Voices
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 11:37:31 PM AEST
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we all have that silent scream
good topic.... |
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