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Ego
Contributed by
Senates
on
Thursday, 3rd April 2014 @ 11:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Broken glass window,
Look right through me,
A faulty mirror,
Reflect yourself through me,
An open door,
Walk right through me,
Asking for spare change,
Walk right past me,
An old book you never read,
Put me on the shelf and never read me,
An endless pit,
Fall down to me,
Never on the ground,
What level are you on?
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2014-04-03 23:33:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ego
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Friday, 4th April 2014 @ 03:52:43 PM AEST (User
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I like this.....the times we feel invisible....good job conveying that.
Kinda lost me at the end..had such good flow then ended rather disjointedly.
Overall, a groovy piece of writing. |
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