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Cold
Contributed by
mistee
on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2014 @ 06:48:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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It feels cold to the touch...
hauntingly cold.
Just as shadows slowly unfold
my tears flow freely
God, I can't take the pain
What am I doing?
I must be insane.
It feels cold to the touch...
the gun laying there.
The pain cuts through me
It cuts like a knife
no one should bear this
turmoil and strife.
Are the bullets in...
Ah, yes I can see.
They will end all horror
inside of me.
The heartaches of my life...
I can't take anymore.
Me and my gun,
we sit here on the floor.
Blackness surrounds me
like a dark cloud,
the silence around me,
it's so loud,
I have no one to love me,
no one to care,
Piercing loneliness is always there.
No one will miss me
as I lay in my grave,
nothing to value,
nothing to save.
God, please forgive me
for this is a sin,
but I can't fight all of
the demons within.
Here in the darkness,
I feel so alone,
Stark pain inside of me,
my will is gone.
Hauntingly cold like the
ice inside of me.
I lift my gun so slowly
I point to my heart
and tears pour down like rain;
If I pull the trigger,
there's no more pain.
Copyright ©
mistee
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2014-04-02 06:48:51]
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Re: Cold
(User Rating: 1 )
by Apollonia on
Thursday, 3rd April 2014 @ 03:27:44 AM AEST
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So sad!
Don't!
But I know the feeling...
Anyways it's a good poem :) |
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Re: Cold
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by sashie08 on
Thursday, 3rd April 2014 @ 08:06:13 AM AEST
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I absolutely love it. yet everything can always get better....mwa just try a little harder.(referring to your problem not the poem)
damn I love this poem!! |
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Re: Cold
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by mick on
Thursday, 3rd April 2014 @ 03:27:28 PM AEST
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| Your words carry so much torment and sorrow. It is a state one often finds themself with no foreseeable way out. Beatiful write. |
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