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Where do we belong?
Contributed by
Livingawkwardly
on
Sunday, 30th March 2014 @ 01:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I look around and see
People talking and laughing
Do they notice me watching
Admiring their confidence
She's with a group of people
And seem to be fitting in
But is this where she belongs
Her life is so confusing
Is this what she wants to do
They want to go and party
They say it tons of fun
I stand here and think
Is this who she really is
Does she want to throw her life away
Wasting all her time on this
She could be doing something else
Maybe with a purpose
There's so much more to this world
If only she would look
I start to think and question life
And who I want to be
Could I make a difference
If I helped even just one
I have a different feeling
Something I've never felt before
I'm not sure what it is
Is it confidence?
Or maybe just the feeling of a purpose
Whatever it is I am loving it
And think this is where I belong
I need to change my life
And am thankful to have found this out
And everyone who's reading this
I hope you know it's true
You can make a difference
No matter what's your age
I hope you all
Find where you belong
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Livingawkwardly
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2014-03-30 13:47:57]
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Re: Where do we belong?
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by Invierno on
Monday, 31st March 2014 @ 08:19:39 AM AEST
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| I applaud your motives. Your poem is good, but the topic is Great. I hope you stick with the same theme and write more on this. Maybe use an example, looking on a person NOW and what they COULD have been if they had not gone down a certain path or chosen a certain person to be with, poor decisions etc. |
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Re: Where do we belong?
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by JacobJowers on
Tuesday, 1st April 2014 @ 04:07:07 PM AEST
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Love it!
I can't really find anything negative to say, so instead I'll give thanks for making my day. |
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