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Eluded by love
Contributed by
Plynx99
on
Thursday, 27th March 2014 @ 04:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Ofcourse I remembered
Indicators of love will be red
I streaked off into outer space
A love still I couldnt evade
In your heart perhaps Ill find a hidden message.
Copyright ©
Plynx99
... [
2014-03-27 16:40:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eluded by love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobJowers on
Thursday, 27th March 2014 @ 05:45:29 PM AEST (User
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Erm.. I do find it a bit generic with not much description.
And it says here you posted it twice, which doesn't really get any stars from me.
Nice.. Try, though? |
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