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A Beach Day!
Contributed by
Bob111111111
on
Thursday, 27th March 2014 @ 03:51:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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On the bright scorching day,
The breakers tossed all day!
As I peered at the sun,
I approached my sunglasses!
Even if the sun could voice,
The sun glew all day!
With joy everyone played!
Copyright ©
Bob111111111
... [
2014-03-27 15:51:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Beach Day!
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngelFox on
Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 06:54:23 PM AEST (User
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This poem took me back to summer fun and games.
Your imagery took me there quickly hoping that summer finally starts. Great work! |
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