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Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
Contributed by
Northernlights
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Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 09:33:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Counting the tiny purple flowers
My heart follows a trail of well trodden paths.
Passing faces those in routine or seeking solace,
And there the gateway to heaven stands bold, a
Monument to the architect who
Draws you to the panorama that with every breath
Opens the world to your eyes and opens them to a
World away from the tiny worlds we toil.
The announcing of freedom, the old wooden door pushed
Open to bring light to a self laden soul,not the world's happiness
But the heavens content,as Nature smiles softly in her perfect blend
Of water colour perfection .
And oh how I can breathe!
Not in the past and not for the future,but in
The moment where dark veils lift and struggle dissipates and I stand
With the world at my feet,not for me to preside but for me to be a part
Of.
Counting the tiny purple flowers my heart follows.............
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Re: Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 11:06:54 PM AEST
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Your vision is breathtaking "heaven's content' "watercolor perfection".."where dark veils lift"..such seductive images of faith and belief.
I especially like the choreography that leads us back to the beginning, full circle.
I feel like I have walked in heaven.
thank you!
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Re: Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2014 @ 02:40:53 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful and I'm not just saying that. It is!!! I love it when poets paint pictures with poetry. And I like the way it pours beauty upon one's life, the life presented here in this poem.
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Re: Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
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by spud on
Wednesday, 9th April 2014 @ 05:58:35 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
If heaven is like this, then that'll do for me!
T
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Re: Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 12:02:15 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
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by brew on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2014 @ 04:09:23 PM AEST
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Very beautiful light. I love nature writes.
Thanks,
Brew~ |
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Re: Counting the Tiny Purple Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 09:42:30 AM AEST
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| oooo this is very nice |
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