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spell
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Sunday, 23rd March 2014 @ 04:27:10 PM in AEST
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As I ponder on the meaning of the written word
A thought appears and magic occurs,
what if everything I write , has power to alter influence or spite?
to spell a word is to spell it right,
and magic relies on a spell casted right
like a hook sent out into the river of cosmic flow
to catch its target disguised as friend not foe
so as to go unnoticed
so its victims
never know
Copyright ©
alicewhite
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2014-03-23 16:27:10]
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Re: spell
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by softerware on
Friday, 28th March 2014 @ 09:30:59 PM AEST
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Everything you say or don't say makes a ripple in this pond of ours. Sadly, we may never see all the waves hit the shore. But as you point out, to "catch its target disguised" to "go unnoticed"
as ripples do, even if we are benefactors instead of victims, we may never know from where the influence originated. Only the author knows..an you're not telling!
softerware
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Re: spell
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 08:50:59 PM AEST
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interesting the two meanings, reminds me of the orthodox and unorthodox/ which witch is more magical/ reminds me of sounds made in Chinese or Japanese, or South Asian languages, which most Westerners miss.
yes, a spell must be correctly propositioned
--- I loved spelling bees when I was in grade school, I was pretty good too, sadly the age of the computer put a hex on that skill I once owned.
I really liked this, it hooked me quite easily...
Well done!
Peace!
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Re: spell
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 01:48:55 PM AEST
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wicked beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: spell
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Friday, 6th February 2015 @ 04:34:30 PM AEST
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Love this. It's very powerful. I've always been prone to praise people in print. The power of the written word.
I'm glad I could help you with my latest poem.
Best,
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