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A Familiar Place
Contributed by
TheDreamer
on
Saturday, 22nd March 2014 @ 08:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In a familiar place,
Finding myself last in a familiar race,
It's difficult not to make a familiar face,
My fake smile is almost perfect now,
Nobody even notices the fraud I am,
I've tricked everyone somehow
I've mastered the art of deception,
I am as nice as everyone else seems,
staring at my own reflection,
What does happy even mean?
Alone and lonely are two different things
Even when a bird is alone it somehow still sings,
As for me I have no chorus,
No ballad or song to bare,
It's not that I can't put the words together,
I just don't think anyone else would even care.
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TheDreamer
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2014-03-22 20:22:30]
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Re: A Familiar Place
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by tin on
Sunday, 23rd March 2014 @ 02:50:18 AM AEST
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| A familiar place indeed... I can feel the emotion reverberating from these words. Just don't quit! They're never easy to find, but someone cares. |
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Re: A Familiar Place
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 12:46:35 AM AEST
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out of your sadness you have written a beautiful
poem, with great images and excellent lines,
alone and lonely are two different things,
yes, like being alone in a crowd; and no matter
what goes on in our lives- those stinkin' birds
always sing,
hugs n' love nessa |
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