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EGO DEATH
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 12:42:01 PM in AEST
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I am the world
And the satellite is my holy crown
Its raining stars in the cosmic ocean
And so again I drown
Like a supernova
Deep in my veins, I burn
Magma poured out of my heart
The planets align and I await my turn
Magnetic waves are my cosmetic pleasure
A hidden star in my mind
Astral treasure
The cosmos shift
And I start to drift
An asteroid on journey into the dark
As I explode,
In space I leave my mark
Copyright ©
plasticherry
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2014-03-20 12:42:01]
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Re: EGO DEATH
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 03:39:36 PM AEST
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Hi There
I love scifi and this sounds as if it could have come straight out of MIB 3 something a Bogledite might say. Excellent write love it.
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Re: EGO DEATH
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by softerware on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 08:22:05 PM AEST
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We are all made of stars says Carl Sagan. You remind us that we are, as you, of the universe.
It is comforting to know that we may all leave our mark, and are not here for no purpose.
Thank you for creating a bridge to our connection with each other and all things, known and unknown.
Think your work here has given us all a "hidden star in our minds".
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