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In the End
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 09:51:56 PM in AEST
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Upon my mind, thoughts fill my head,
Within my memories I've always said,
The tears that fall are accounted for,
My mind is wounded by memory's sword,
Upon my heart, I feel all pain,
Within every beat, hides the blame,
The tears it's wept could fill an ocean,
My heart has grown weary blocking out emotion,
Upon my soul, I bear the scars,
Within this cage it rattles the bars,
The tears it's cried have turned to stone,
My soul has grown weak and become cold,
Upon my flesh, I fake a smile,
Within that lie, I live in denial,
The tears that fall continue to cut deep,
My flesh will decay as my body sleeps.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: In the End
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 12:25:08 AM AEST
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I doubt I can feel exactly what you are going through but in my own memories I can feel the pain and sadness and the putting on a fake smile.
My cousin has a saying about fake smiles and it goes like this: "I am happiest when I am depressed."
A very well expressed poem. I wish you didn't have to be going through this.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: In the End
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 12:12:50 PM AEST
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Hi Phantom
Yes very sad and if that sadness is not by your own hand then its harder to handle. Reads well flows nice great write from the heart. However still sad. Hope things look up for you soon. Take care.
Greetings
Rus |
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Re: In the End
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by mick on
Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 04:43:23 PM AEST
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| Such simple thoughts and words put together capture deep emotions. Great writing. |
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Re: In the End
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 02:29:17 AM AEST
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so well written, sadly beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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