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The Earth is Crying
Contributed by
Livingawkwardly
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Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 04:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look around
The sun is gone
The sky is black
I don't see rain
I don't hear thunder
I feel sadness and anger
I sit here and listen
Quietness overcomes
Then boom
It has started
I hear the thunder
I sense the pain
I feel...
The clouds crying
Seeming so sad
I hear...
the earth roaring
Sounding so angry
I see...
The sky flashing
Breaking apart
And I realize
The earth is crying
and I am not alone
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Livingawkwardly
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2014-03-19 16:37:35]
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Re: The Earth is Crying
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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Very sad. I am not exactly sure if I understand this entirely but I do know that we must take care of our planet or it will surely revolt against us.
Nice job on this.
Welcome to YPDC and keep writing.
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Re: The Earth is Crying
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by twitterbird on
Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 09:23:49 PM AEST
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| I get it, it's beautiful. Thanks for sharing :) you aren't alone. |
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Re: The Earth is Crying
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 20th March 2014 @ 12:27:43 PM AEST
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Help me if I'm wrong I don't think this one is quite about the earth. Its more like likening ones inner being to the earth and nature, when storms are raging around. So to do we suddenly awaken to storms in our life. Just like grass in the wing we bend and bow to the storms and other times like trees we stand strong against them. Good write
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Re: The Earth is Crying
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2014 @ 10:00:29 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful.....
hugs n' love nessa |
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